Omega

General The Arts
61

The shading isn’t quite like that of the original Omega (you forgot some black and white highlights). Plus there’s a black outline.

62

I think the black outline is on purpose. Looks good. VerY.

63

and now i bring you…

all but the queen are by me
queen is be me AND Rundas ;D

alpha is still WIP
Gamma is obviously WIP
Zeta is currently not-WIP xD

also, there is a black outline on the Omega
the the alpha isnt a towering huge thing, it isnt big enough to get the black highlight, nor the right shape
though i did add some white

64

You need more sel-out, and I don’t agree with the third Metroid’s size and the alpha’s size, so create a compromise between both sizes. Alpha still needs more work. I’m generally seeing a perspective problem: either make all sprites completely from the side or at an angle, like you did for the Omega. I’ll make an edit of the Alpha sometime.

65

The alpha still just looks wrong. They may all have outlines, but only he has a solid, black outline around the nucleus. And he just feels blurry/oddly shaded overall… sorry I can’t be more descriptive, but I can’t put my finger on what’s wrong with it exactly. It just looks muddy.

66

thats not black on the nucleus

edit*

also, the gamma is still very wip, thats why theres no shading =P

size, shape, everything is still being toyed with

67

It sure as hell looks black when not zoomed in. I’d suggest lightening it a bit. Also, some of his horns are grey-outlined, and two are black. Consistency plz.

Beyond that, the nucleus appears rather pillowed.

The green shell looks great though, if it’s any consolation. Excellent texturing.

68

theres no grey… anywhere

the 3 horn on the front are surrounded by purple, the 2 leg clawthings are surrounded by black

also, i was focusing more on the armored part so, yay :3

edit*

editedit*
i just saw something i need to fix…
10 points to whoever can tell me what it is

69

The back leg of the original hangs down much farther.

70

CM the nucleus is just obnoxious. I’ll help you with it later.

71

no points for zurg
the new one has a longer body

also, the fix is the double horns
on the alpha the back one stick out more, on the gamma its the other way around
that is now fixed =P

edit*
nvm
the legs on the original come out of the membrane, which is erroneous

so lets call it a"creative difference"

72

Love it man, cant wait for the whole thing.

73

its uhm…
alot harder then the alpha D=

74

Yeah, I can tell. Love how its turning out. Looks aweshum.

75

thank you =D

76

Yah weylcuhm.

77

I like the cocoon and the gamma metroid facinng forward,cmc

78

gamma isnt quite facing forward yet, thats the next sprite i need to outline

also that cocoon was a rip xD

79

ohh…

80

gamma turn is EVIL