the shading seems pillowy to me
Actually, looking at reference pictures, her shoulders need to be up a little more rather than slouched, if you know what I mean.
Besides that, I actually think that the shading is marvelous.
Women generally have a wider pelvis than men (I wonder why 
).
I suggest you make her neck a bit longer and give her arms a less cylindrical shape (give a better shape of her shoulders and thin her arms). You should also make her forearms slightly longer, her hands more slender and give her knees more of a rectangular shape ( | | like that). Her feet seem strange, try and mess around with them. Good luck!
Wow, that is great lighting. 
QFT
Pretty good, better than what I can do. Even though you’ve showed that already 
I don’t understand what the hell any of that is supposed to be, but it looks freakin’ awesome. Excellent lighting and shaping.
butch how are you so good? T.T
i’m such a noob at sprites.
it’d be a good job for you. 
lol, “a bit”
Yeah, I like it, just put more soldiers, gore and action!
Oh and make the ground look better =/
this
EIGHT!!!
Man, I wish I could do that… D:
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…Liks. That is insane. 0_0
<(^.^<) ^(^.^)^ (>^.^)> Kirby salutes you for your fine art.
QFT.
Woah.
lol
Liks, you never seem to disappoint
Mmmh, I’ll see what I can do with that. Good shading, shame you can’t/don’t want to finish it.
Wow.
^Jaw drop emote icon, lol.
You make Cobra kick rad ass, Liks.
Do you have a ref for this?